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Cheese



Posing for a picture...
One hand rests on a Bentley.
The other hand holds 

fear tightly still. 


This is not the first fan
that snapped this funny,
charismatic man, while out
and about the town...

This man who smiled
on the outside,
died a little more
with each photographic grin.

A contest entry

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  • Girl-Interrupted gold member
    October 21, 2008

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    this leads the reader to think of a side seldom recognized. you brought it to light in an ingenious way. the piece mirrored the picture exactly.
    I can almost see the smile fading before our eyes.
    amazing!!


  • Floorboards
    October 2, 2008

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    Poor old Dudley, very evocative last stanza ma man,
    nice one, good luck in de contest,
    hope yer well pal,
    Alex.


  • Frodofan silver member
    September 28, 2008
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    Interesting, though depressing. Leaves the reader to ponder.

    Thanks for entering.

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