immense rain
plunges
shocking my soul
in the summer
downward drops
taunt my flesh
sprouting true images
opens my mind of my past
that truly compels me
mysteriouly I am left trembling
cold & confused I go inside
to make sense of just what happend
Author notes
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A contest entry
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Comments
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very enchanting!
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This speaks to me of the confusion experienced when doors of perception open suddenly.
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"shocking my soul
in the summer
downward drops
taunt my flesh "
Simply beautiful!
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The element of doubt created in this poem makes it truely uniqe...Thank you for entering!
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Thank you for commenting on my poem!
~~Iridessa MoonFlower~~
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deep
this piece says alot inso little words.
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a wondeful poem I thuoght your poem was so deep and powerfully sad we can never forget our pains and hurt of the past but we can in time learn to live withit the past does not eqaul the future good luck in the contest
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