$19.52
Take the money,
Hand back the change,
And do it all over again.
"Hi how are you?"
{Well honestly,
I want to blow this place up and everyone in it...}
"I'm fine how are you?"
$19.52
Take the money,
Hand back the change,
And do it all over again.
Random Insperation
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modest
it has a good theme, about the monotany of most peoples life, and its a great poem, but it doesnt really draw ones attention, it just doesnt quite hook the imagination, nor does it draw much attention to the words... -
u sound like marshall matters a lil bit
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Hey
This poem is cool I love the way it was done. You expressed ure self greatly with great words.. I understand how ya feel though.. once again marvelous job with this poem.
I want to blow this place up and everyone in it...}
"I'm fine how are you?"
$19.52
Take the money,
Hand back the change,
And doit all over again.
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