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despair

the darkness is surrounding me
as i lie in bed waiting to die

nothing but withering pain
as i think about him and her

no lightness
as i try to imagine life without him

agonizing about what went wrong
as the time passes slowly

wallowing in self-pity
as he is having fun

darkness swallows me whole
there is nothing left to hold on to
but a girl in deep and utter despair

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