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Sin Device

Boxed Up Guilt, He felt alone,
Troubles, Worries, Where was home?
She watched him Cry, Cry Painful Doubt,
But all she did was leave him out.
He later grew up 6 years of age,
Blood-stained tears Dominate Rage.
The lights turned out, The Door Locked in Silence,
What was done, his wrists had fighted.
Twist and turn throughout the night,
She refused to help him, a Sin Device.
By the age of 10, he ran away,
To Where? Who knew? Always a short stay.
He burned himself, to cover the Scars,
She didn't care, she had no heart.
His birthday came, He didn't know.
He'd been gone too long, from the world he used to know.
13 and stressed, he was trying to make it.
"Abused?" They asked, He tried to fake it.
She cut him loose, she had her fill.
He'd Lost his Love, His Fate, Her Thrill.

Boxed up Guilt, He felt alone.
Troubles, Worries, No where to go.
She watched him Die, Die a Painful Death,
And all her Sin was put to rest.

Author notes

No Notes Really, Just another True-life relationship.

You don't have to perceive this as a Romantic relationship..

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  • Lady Mak
    May 26

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    Wow!!!! this is so full of emotion and pain ...
    very deep and thought provoking and sad ...so vey sad. Cut loose at 13 ... tragic.

    The pain and anguish cries out from your words.

    May love and peace shine on you and fill your heart with joy.


  • chilali
    November 6, 2008
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    Nicely penned I really like the repeated line. Well done! Thank you for sharing


  • XxjustinsgirlxX
    September 29, 2008
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    That was very good i loved this

  • Dr. POGO
    September 28, 2008
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    Reminds me of someone I used to know...

    Beautiful.

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