Capture x

Crescent arch she falls beside me

untamed ..

releasing the lashes flattering

in hazelnut whip.

Cup of plenty she seeps lust before me

unrelenting..

sensual perfume pores in satin

caressing oils absorbed.

String of attraction,

ribbons the breeze I touch

floating as the kite takes flight

breaking free her awning.

Author notes

The above painting is by the incomparable Paul John Ballard.

The name is, Beauty of the Female.

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A contest entry

Adults Only by special request. . . by JinSays. 300 points, ended October 1, 2008, 5 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest

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JinSays
September 30, 2008

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String of attraction,
ribbons the breeze I touch
floating as the kite takes flight
breaking free her awning.

OHMY!
You are fabulous! Fabulous! LOL
damn, what a rush
You really need to stop writing so well in my contests, people are going to think I'm partial

The sense of overwhelming awe is what I love about this. A treasure to look at, admire, worship, but don't touch.
Break free the awning, baby!
LOL
You freakin rock honey,
jin
LadyDementia
September 29, 2008

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Very sensual, perfect for the picture. Flows like a dream hun, beautiful work All the best in your contest
daviscth
September 28, 2008

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This is a stunning picture for your prompt sissy and your words are amazing. I really like the way you have captured such amazing sensuality. Good luck...
maralisa
September 28, 2008

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aw wow your poem is brilliant julie I love your beautiful sensual imagery from stanza one through to the last line good luck in the contest my friend take care marina
Sweet Impatience
September 28, 2008

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Wow Mum. this is beautiful.. you've penned sensual beautifully.. I have such a long way to go to get this good. absolutely beautiful.

good luck in the contest

kat
onesugar
September 28, 2008

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A beautiful sensual treat, whipped to perfection.
Good luck hon
~sugar~
chilali
September 28, 2008

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Very nicely penned!! Incredible! Sensual! Amazing words and flow throughout the poem. I am dying to read your next poem Thanks for a great read.