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Do. . .don't try

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Never give up.
These three words are hope.
but
They can be non triumphant
When one fails to listen
To their Echo..
Dream first
Desire and
Become.
Therefore, heed their power
for
Their message...
Are our stepping stones
To a better life.
so
Never, Never give up.

dragonheart1


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http://allpoetry.com/poem/4376025 promt...Never give up

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  • sOuL
    September 29, 2008

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    IF people see this poem as a gold trophy winner in this contest then they will be happy
    because this is a great poem
    the author have done a great job
    salute to author


  • maralisa silver member
    September 28, 2008

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    a brilliant poem your imagery and advice is great yes how right you are we should never give up and always stay possitive in life good luck in the contest