Sun comes farther away from me
chills weather my cold's sniffles
down flows tissues, inside secret tears
lonely forecast shadows my sky.
I'm sick take care of me...
change my linen in my worries,
that love is ended leaving me chilled
heart wrenched things leave me fallen.
Sooth this old time ever lasting
with days never ending in sorrows depth,
hold me and rock me for I can't sleep
this fever burns immensely...
Cast me into your life of friendship and love
this cold will pass and you hold the cure,
single me out of the dry grass, before I bale
into a never endless deep depression...
Author notes
I'm Sick Take Care of Me...
A contest entry
- A Contest by luna-midnight.
700 points, ended October 19, 2008, 24 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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lol...haha. okay wow. well i didnt exactly get taken care of, but you deff captured some emotions and things potrayed of people sick, more than just an undergoing physical illness
i really liked this, good luck and take care
Stephanie ♥
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