They’d only just met;
sipping lemonade in the
breath of late September
and wearing barely anything,
but youth and passion.
A word of four letters
kissed their aching skin
as tender thoughts trickled
from their fingertips,
and lips, and hips,
and arrayed as a wave
of gentle heat beneath the
shade of the season’s lushness.
Author notes
image taken from contest.
In a list
A contest entry
- Picture Prompt Contest! by Sweet Impatience.
1300 points, ended October 12, 2008, 21 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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Ah..no words just love is in the air..a heart warming poetry with so much soft immageries and so much passions aroudn the words..a beautiful piece indeed
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a awow a brilliant take on the promt I loved the last stanza good luck in the contest


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Softly sensual and very pretty! Makes me wonder if the four letter word was lust or love lol.
Nicely done!!


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Well done! Very sensual and compelling. Good luck in the contest!


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http://i290.photobucket.com/albums/ll272/Temptress41/Adult%20Graphics/sensual-1.jpg
here is the link to your prompt. please let me know if this doesn't work for you. I'll find you something else
kat
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