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Late September

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They’d only just met;
sipping lemonade in the
breath of late September
and wearing barely anything,

but youth and passion.

A word of four letters
kissed their aching skin
as tender thoughts trickled
from their fingertips,

and lips, and hips,
and arrayed as a wave
of gentle heat beneath the
shade of the season’s lushness.

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  • PrabhuDayal Khattar silver member
    October 12, 2008

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    Ah..no words just love is in the air..a heart warming poetry with so much soft immageries and so much passions aroudn the words..a beautiful piece indeed


  • maralisa silver member
    October 6, 2008
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    a awow a brilliant take on the promt I loved the last stanza good luck in the contest


  • kiwigirljacks gold member
    October 2, 2008

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    Softly sensual and very pretty! Makes me wonder if the four letter word was lust or love lol.

    Nicely done!!


  • arafura gold member
    October 2, 2008
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    Well done! Very sensual and compelling. Good luck in the contest!


  • Sweet Impatience gold member
    September 28, 2008

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    http://i290.photobucket.com/albums/ll272/Temptress41/Adult%20Graphics/sensual-1.jpg

    here is the link to your prompt. please let me know if this doesn't work for you. I'll find you something else

    kat

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