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A Timeless Treasure

Pebbles placed
    with precision,

Lead you towards
    my evanescent essence...

handle

    with

          care.

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Picture Prompt:
http://oki-oki.deviantart.com/art/imaginary-friends-84873128

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  • Aussie Gypsy gold member
    October 8, 2008

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    This is beautiful, you capture something unique and special in this short form. best to you in the contest


  • MichaelLeeSmyth
    September 29, 2008

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    Being home for the first time in months, this is what it's like watching the grands. Though we really don't know why they do what they do, it's fun to watch them growing into their own.
    well done


  • Patpowers silver member
    September 28, 2008
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    NICE JOB LOTUS-MAMA! I liked what I read in this!! THANKS!