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Pathway

Stones mark
    a
    broken path
where I
  stumbled, but
    never
let myself fall.




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Picture Prompt: http://oki-oki.deviantart.com/art/imaginary-friends-84873128
13 words

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  • Aussie Gypsy gold member
    October 8, 2008

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    Finally someone who didn't let themselves fall, you did beautifully seeing the sunshine in a dark picture. best to you in the contest


  • maralisa silver member
    September 28, 2008
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    a very powerful poem is so few words good luck in the contest