Dear diary, I killed a man today
I smashed his skull to pieces as he tried to run away
He looked into my eyes, I felt his burning glare
I crushed them to each other to make one out of the pair
He screamed for help as I tore skin off in strands
So I crushed his throat within my bare and bloodied hands
I left the body where I finished laying in the park
Now he's cold and rotten as the ravens pick him apart
Dear Diary, I made a doll today
Soul is gone, eyes of glass, flesh is cold and grey
Hand picked every party and brought them to my home
TLC, all from me, for the flesh and bone
They laughed at me, they'll never see the beauty of withdrawal
Who's laughing now, jokes on you, it's made out of you all
You'll be my doll, you'll be my friend, and we'll never be apart
Because you'll always love me with your cold and lifeless heart
Dear Diary, I loved a girl today
She doesn't know I like her but soon she will I pray
She struggled in vain as I tied her to a chair
Eyes to the floor like she doesn't even care
Why won't she love me back, why can't she look at me?
Is it cause I smashed and slashed and killed her family?
It wasn't my fault, they tried to keep her to themselves
Now they can stare at her forever with there heads upon my shelves
Dear Diary, I lit a fire today
I watched them squirm, I watched them burn and scream out in dismay
They wouldn't let me in, so I didn't let them out
I poured the gas, lit the match, and watched them run about
Burning flesh, the smell of fear, the taste of power divine
Burn in hell you mother fuckers, now your soul is mine
Bathe in blood, raining ash, cleanse my soul tonight
Churn the coal, watch me glow in my sheer delight
Dear Diary, I broke a law today
Muzzle flash, their lungs collapsed, I took their breath away
Blade up to his throat, I looked into his soul
I dragged the blade across his skin, and watched his blood flow
He cried and gurgled as I giggled, glass up to his neck
Filled a pint, with his life, leaving a ghoulish wreck.
Let it flow down my throat, sweet and warm it was
Almost forgot in my pleasure, never leave a job undone
Dear Diary, I met someone today
Idle hands, he understands,
Why I am this way
A match made in hell,
First kiss sealed in sin
Hellfire harlot,
The original bringer of grim
Hand in hand they sow,
A wake of pain and hate
All within our path,
Suffer a gruesome fate
Heaven wouldn't take us,
Hell was too afraid
For our pain, for our loss,
All debt has been repaid
Author notes
Alright, this might be confusing at first and I don't have plus to make it any easier, so here I go.
First verse is a male, second verse is a female, two different diary's, it goes back and forth till the last verse, where i split them into the same order (Male then female) all the way o the end.
I hope that made sense of it...otherwise, two crazy people meet and fall in love
I dedicate this to my Jamie, love you babe
"She ricochets and you don't notice"
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Comments
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Wow amazing!!!! I completely like this!!! very very well done !!! Thanks for entering and best of luck in this contest!!!!
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emotional, powerful, insane!
You didnt exactly discussed my quote but you showed it in actions. That even the most insane and lonely people can see a little bit of sanity and love. Truly a good poem...the details were pleasently gorey....Good luck in my contest, and I think I found my first poem to put on the finalist list...
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Very dark, but rich in its imagery and true some matches are definitely made in Hell.
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wow this is very violent yes. But very well written. I see how things progress in these two peoples lives. I hope this is totally fiction by the way. Though sick people do happen in this world. Thanks for sharing this with us and placing it in our friends reading list.
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wow wow wow!!! im def reading more of ur stuff... added u to faves... hope u dun mind,
hugs,
georgie,
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Macabre darkened genious (or is it insanity?) remniscent of Edgar Allen Poe and the like. Bloody and gruesome, yet...inexplicably remaining eloquent and tasteful. The final stanza brings it to a satisfying haunting and tender finish.
Dear Diary, I met someone today
Idle hands, he understands,
Why I am this way
Even demons fall in love and find companionship it seems.
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HOLY SHIT!
Now THIS was what i was looking for. you have everything i asked for and mentioned. Thanks so much for your entry. i lvoe the madness behind the killers actions and the words you used. It's all a perfect insanity. This whole paragraph was fuckin PERFECT AND EXACTLY what i was expecting:
"Dear Diary, I broke a law today
Muzzle flash, their lungs collapsed, I took their breath away
Blade up to his throat, I looked into his soul
I dragged the blade across his skin, and watched his blood flow
He cried and gurgled as I giggled, glass up to his neck
Filled a pint, with his life, leaving a ghoulish wreck.
Let it flow down my throat, sweet and warm it was
Almost forgot in my pleasure, never leave a job undone"
THANKS AGAIN
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i'm glad you enjoyed it, i hope it does well
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Dark & Different!
You did make some dark statements here, gruesome too! Crazy, huh? Good luck in the contest!
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wow... crazy... thats very twilight zone-ish. thanks for contributing to the contest!
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Geesh, that was intense! I really enjoyed reading this.. Best of luck to you in this contest..........
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An exquisite blood-bath. You melded the two accounts together perfectly, they complement each other without flaw. Your rhyming was also amazing. Great flow. Very macabre, dark, and delicious. I love it!!!!!
(Thanks, angel.)
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i'm so happy you like it, i was really nervous that you wouldn't like it. I love you
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Gosh!
Oh my!!! Dear diary I fell in love today!!! I am totally and and crazily in love with this poem. You did so great, it was so awesome! I loved it from beginning to end, every word, every line, every sin, every breath, it's so f**king original!!! I never liked diaries and writing them, and now, after reading your poem, I badly want to start one of my own sins... I am so f**king in love with your poem, I read it over and over, it's my all times favorite, it's worth more than gold. Thanks a million for entering my contest, I LOVE YOU!
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