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A Beautiful Soul

Short locks of golden hair,
A beautiful smile as if she lived without a care,
Though deep inside...
A perplexed mind.

There are a few that play with her heart and mind
Still to them, she remains kinder than kind.
There are a few that speak nothing other than lies
And ignore the sound of her fraying cries.

Penning down beautiful poetry to channel her thoughts,
She sits, anxiously trying to connect the dots.
She wants to be happy and cared for.
Why won't he leave his foolish mind games at the door?

The moon and the stars,
They smile for her,
The rain,
cries with her.


The stars glittered,
just for her
The moon sang a song...
Only for her..

"Don't you cry, don't you worry, everything's going to be okay
All you need is faith and hope and remember to always pray
For the heavens will soon send your heart a cure,
Oh Princess Virgina of the west, the purest of the pure."

Author notes

I have combined options 3 and 4. Atleast I hope I did manage to accomplish Option 3. This poem is dedicated to none other than Stephanie Wood, a beautiful soul indeed. Probably my first friend here on AP. Beautiful, smart, funny! Oh and a smart ass as well! Steph! I am sorry this poem is late, thank you for waiting for my entry though And I know it is not written well enough and you deserve a much better dedication than this and you will get one soon enough! But this is just something I wrote in 5 minutes and I meant every word of it. You are a beautiful person and just don't let things get you down! You deserve so much better than what you are going through now! Okay. I shall stop now! Hehe.

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  • awannabepoet
    July 26

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    What a wonderful poem you have penned, even if you say you wrote it in 5 minutes as to me the time it takes to espress one's true feeling has no measure.

    "The moon and the stars,
    They smile for her,
    The rain,
    cries with her."

    This in of itself could be a poem and probably should be one as you have a great way with words my new found friend.

    Thank you for sharing this.

    I like it, I like it so!


  • Disturbed Prodigy
    November 14, 2008

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    Truly a wonderful and beautiful poem that you have done here my friend, keep it flowing and congrads on the contest


  • luna-midnight gold member
    October 14, 2008

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    aww, wow, omg i think im crying, and smiling and laughing, this is just so beautiful, thanks so much, i love it with all my heart, youare too kind to me *huggles* love you <333
    Stephanie ♥


  • MD Masroor
    October 5, 2008
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    Lovely poem! Yay!