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Waiting

From girl to woman
Here I sit
and wait...
to be embraced again

A contest entry

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  • AutumnGypsy gold member
    October 8, 2008

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    Doesn't it seem we are always waiting to be embraced in life, maybe we should get out and embrace someone else. Best to you in the contest


  • Pure Thought silver member
    September 29, 2008
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    Well written, succinct, just like I like 'em.
    Good luck.

    Buddy