Black persuasive horizon talk to me
say what will I need to listen,
in sun's rays silence, between your branches
dust the air in radiant lights, a sparkle
Black persuasive horizon talk to me
put my senses a flow, as winds in fine tune
let moon lift his fears into daylight seeing,
yes, tell me how nature loves all of me.
As I set the silent vespers of morning dawn,
passion in the sky soothing every sorrow, gone
into a gleam inside, during the rise of warmth
to shades cool whispers saying gently, I love you.
Author notes
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A contest entry
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300 points, ended October 29, 2008, 41 entries
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Comments
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this is a beautiful poem but seems to be lacking something to me, I dont know what and im sorry to be so bluntly honest but i feel as a judge i should be. Thank you for your entry.
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WOW...
GREAT POEM.. was this a spiritual connection, just a pure wishful inquistion?
but yea, it was great write
Comment my poems please if you will thanks!!!
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