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where the wind takes me

Where the wind takes me
Is where I will go,
To a never-ending story,
To a promise land;

I'll wait by the water,
Utill that day,
When the wind blows me over,
And I cannot stand,
I'll go where the wind takes me
And then I'll stand,
On the mountain,
Or whatever is land,
For surely,
That is the promise land.

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  • Just beautiful words coming directly from the heart of the poet,..just a beautiful image of the soul is here..well done..thnks for sharing..

  • maralisa gold member
    October 6
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    a nice poem good luck in the contest


  • kiwigirljacks gold member
    October 2
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    Hi there, as my cojudge has been unwell I am here to give you your nature picture to write for, but um I see you have done a write without the picture, however you were supposed to wait for a picture to write for so here is one for you if you'd like to edit your write to suit... thanks!!

    http://jodesign.deviantart.com/art/nature-45208153


  • PrabhuDayal Khattar gold member
    September 29
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    Humm..this is indeeda mystic connectivity you are making with the nature in a good and comfortable way..just beutiful...


  • Pisces rainbow gold member
    September 28
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    BEAUTIFULLY WRITTEN MY FRIEND
    GOD BLESS MY FRIEND...


  • Sensual Angel gold member
    September 28

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    what is the category that you would like your prompt from? you have a choice of 5. please let me know
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