Tints of tenderness melted
When seducing your temper.
Love so sappily scented
As we ramped and ramped
Milky Way of your birthmarks
Was so misty, - they scattered.
Whisper echoed the plucks -
and -
I could let it and let it
You were trying my tension
The reality fainted
Was the throbbing so sensual,
When we painted and painted.
A contest entry
- It's All In A Kiss by silverscent.
450 points, ended October 3, 2008, 23 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Take Me By Moonlight. by Poetryintheblood.
450 points, ended September 29, 2008, 17 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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I had to read it more than once, not for any bad reason, but because I was in awe with every word I didn't really pay attention past the first stanza.
I love the subtlety of this, and the repetition is so gentle too. Thanks for entering. -
Thank you for your most beautifully sensual entry, good luck in my contest, Josie
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