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[Fly Away]

You ask me to take you there,
There by the moonlight,
Where you fell free,
And can dance with me;

You say to me,
"Is there no passion,
Layed in your breast?"
And then you turn away;

So before I loose you,
Here I'll say,
I'll take you on a trip,
I'll take you where there's moonlight,
And you can fly away.

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  • PrabhuDayal Khattar silver member
    November 14, 2008

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    Humm..nice dream..and wonderful invitation you have in the words of your heart warming poetry my friend..well done..and thanks..

  • Poetryintheblood gold member
    September 29, 2008
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    Thank you for your most beautiful entry, good luck in my contest, Josie