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Eat Me...

Eat me with your eyes,
Draw me in,
Make me shudder.
Let it never end,
As your hand moves across,
My skin,
My lips,
My hair.
My breath,
I cannot breathe.
Dear lord,
Is this what love is?
Don’t draw away,
Oh please,
Can’t you feel that?
Electricity,
Life.
Fight for me,
Worship me,
Eat me…eat me…
Eat me with your eyes.

Author notes

Because honestly that's what it should really be all about, either way. They should be able to just seduce you with their eyes and make you melt, begging for more. But most importantly they have to be willing to fight. Give a damn. If not, run!

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  • Lineave
    October 10, 2008
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    I love this! Enough said!


  • stompsalot
    October 7, 2008

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    i love the concept of having them "eat you" with their eyes. it flows nice. and some people can actually devour you with their eyes alone! and when it happens you will be breathless...
    nice work.
    *stomps