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The castle in the mist

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In the north part of the north,
A mountain taller then any other,
And a waterfall giving life to the nature.
 
When the mist lays low in the hills,
And the silence is the only thing you hear,
That is when it appears the old ruin.
 
 Within a ghosts of the past roams,
Time untouched by changes,
And memories never forgotten.
 
I once lived here among the dead,
Lured by they're dreams,
And fooled to believe I was home.
 
If you ever step inside the castle,
Keep in mind no one will be leaving,
Living or dead they are controlled.
 
You ask of who they are controlled,
Well the dark powers of course,
You ask why I was able to leave?
 
I was the darkness controlling,
A old demon I am, you see dear,
And now its time for you to die.
 
I will never let these spirits free,
I will keep on hunting for new ones,
And lure them into my realm of death.
 
You can run and hide for all eternity,
But you will never be able to leave,
For this is your new home now, dear.

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  • Sweet Impatience gold member
    October 12, 2008
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    wow this is like omg wow.. the thought of being trapped in that forever is something that I don't think that I would like.. nope I love my freedom to damn much

    You did an outstanding job with this prompt..

    good luck

    kat

  • Sweet Impatience gold member
    September 28, 2008

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    http://night-fate.deviantart.com/art/landiya-om-demahra-si-a-98961959

    I couldn't find mountains & waterfalls.. so I got you the next best thing I hope. please let me know if this prompt works for you if not, I'll find you something else.

    mommy


    • Meroza
      September 28, 2008
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      I think I will write a epic novel on this one *mohahahahahaha*

    • Meroza
      September 28, 2008
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      Damn, I though I could hide my ID in your contest

      The prompt is close enough. I sure will get something out of it