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Georgie Did You

Georgie Peorgie kiss the girls
and what!!!!!
forget what you heard,
only thing correct was make them cry.

Yes Georgie is waiting his life cell
behind steel chalice bars and stripes,
for he carved his girls with a butcher knife
those folks lied and lied, because...

Yes Georgie had acres of help feasting-
the feast at dinning tables all around ...
in Pumpkin Pie town with seedy people galore
Dinner was served with brain pudding and more.

Yes Georgie made them cry, as they scurried
in a hurry from his chain-saw rip-age,
but one broke free and told the rhyme
inside a town not cannibal, like Pumpkin Pie.

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Twisted from a Nursery Rhyme

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  • InMyFlames
    October 15, 2008
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    very disturbing piece of writing here. I like the whole theme, good job and thanks for entering