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Obliviation

Imagination runs wild through the eyes of a child, obliviated to his solitude...

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special thanks to *oki-oki for this beautiful image! http://oki-oki.deviantart.com/art/imaginary-friends-84873128

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  • Little Miss Mental
    November 8, 2008

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    Beautiful♥

    This was so simple...so short...but so powerful! True in that imagination is present in children, but sometimes never forgotten as we age...I'm an example of this But this was great, good one aunty


  • AutumnGypsy gold member
    October 8, 2008

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    This is a beautiful piece here, oh to have the world through the eyes of a child again. Superb. best to you in the contest


  • Haiku-bless-you silver member
    September 28, 2008

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    Thoughtful reply to the picture prompt, very nicely worded, 13 words well employed.

    Dennis


  • Sandygram
    September 28, 2008

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    You have penned a wonderful take on the picture prompt. A great 13 words!! Best of luck! Take care, Sandy