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Small journey

Missing image
sitting safe
traffic deserted,

child lays milestones
placing stones,
crossing
one behind other.

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credited to 'http://oki-oki.deviantart.com/art/imaginary-friends-84873128'

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  • AutumnGypsy gold member
    October 8, 2008

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    This is a beautiful take on this prompt, you captured something unique here. best to you in the contest


  • maralisa silver member
    September 28, 2008
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    a nice takeon the promt good luck in the contest