tasting life's reality at ease before real life starts and spoils it all
A contest entry
- 13 words by Aussie Gypsy.
450 points, ended October 8, 2008, 41 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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This is a tragic way of viewing this prompt but written in a great way. best to you in the contest
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Brilliant, all in 13 words
Good luck in the contest
xxx


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ha, isn't this the truth? managed to catch a pretty significant dynamic of life in 13 words.





