Oki set on cobbled pavement shadows
inside dense thicket stone placement,
battle organized...
Author notes
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and ready for her battle
amongst the savage delight of daylight.
Her heart pounded in and out with each toss
they caved-in enormous vile words at her,
in a rumors throw, she wanted for unreality
to turn her into a none existing loved doll.
To be placed on a pedestal inside life-
a life of cuddles and no mud holes to sink,
they clammed her in a corner, as they tossed
and tossed cruelty for stones crushing her.
Down into plunders of darkness, ravaged in hollows
beneath their perspective inside doom,
she froze to stair and ponder each stone
organized to tear her apart, a thread at a time
A contest entry
- 13 words by AutumnGypsy.
450 points, ended October 8, 2008, 41 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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I am sorry here, I have a real problem with the way this is presented. I asked for 13 words, NO MORE, it is almost a form a cheating to use your author notes to add more, which I might add I didn't read. best to you
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