In a blue 69 Volkswagon Bug
I drove to meet
a lover
In the November cold
she insisted
on having sex
in the bed of her
pickup truck
a different kind
of nut cracker
Author notes
VW Bug Nut Cracker
A contest entry
- Your Challenge Is To... by Dalaney.
900 points, ended October 2, 2008, 17 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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comical, and well written
I enjoyed this read. It made me laugh, and who doesn't need a good chuckle every once in a while. I have nothing negative to say about this. It's great just the way it is. Keep up the excellent work, and know that when you leave your readers with a good laugh they will surely be back for more. T.S.
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T.S.
It's from my early years. November was really cold.lol
Thanks for reading.
joe
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lol...
i needed this tonight. thank you for the smile and for entering. love, Harvey 
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Harvey
Thanks for reading. Glad I perked you up. This really happened, a few years ago.lol
Joe
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wow, very nice I must say. You really have a way with words!
by the way this did crack me up. -
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Alive
Thank you for reading this. Glad you got a chuckle.
Is that really your tat?
Joe
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Something that you probably will never forget and lol now I won't either! Good luck in the contest!
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Maggie
Yep, It was cold, and an eye opener.lol
Joe
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lol...funny ending and what a perfect title
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AM
Thanks, you are a dear.
Joe
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I can't stop laughing...
♥Becky♥
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Becky
Thank you! i appreciate your kind comment.
Joe
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