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Journey

Missing image
With care
I make the pathway
to my own destiny,
never to falter.

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13 words

Artist Credit -
http://oki-oki.deviantart.com/art/imaginary-friends-84873128


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  • individuality gold member
    April 10

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    hehehe aye we start when we can, to make the journey smoother for us, pebbles and grit, we willw ear them smooth with healthy footsteps - a good poem.


  • AutumnGypsy gold member
    October 8, 2008

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    this is something with a little hope and I love that about what you have written. best to you in the contest


  • maggiejamespoet silver member
    September 29, 2008
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    Wonderful poem with so few words yet packed with a big punch! Good luck in the contest!


  • mysticstorm gold member
    September 28, 2008

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    Beautiful words of inspiration and encouragement...strenght found to never let go or allow others to choice for you...well done my friend...
    best to you!
    mystic


  • Candy6
    September 28, 2008
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    Beautiful poem

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