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Shadows Cast

Into the  sunset Wall Street dips,

an Uncle’s emaciated hand;

whose golden fingers tremble
700,000,000 within its fist!

High rise deco splashed gray,
from Harlem to Herald Square;

a 21st century fin de siecle,

tries to draw a smily face.


Tears pour in towering molds,
shadows cast on severed limbs
taking a few Moore punches,

and  still walking in the pain.

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  • Danna Hobart
    October 7, 2008
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    I really enjoyed your images. Thank you for entering.


  • Cup-a-Joe
    September 29, 2008
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    Right in touch with today. Our tax dollars at work.lol
    Joe

  • goalsv
    September 28, 2008
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    Very good, so much imagery and emotion flows out of this one. The vision and feeling just ooz out.