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Rely On Me

Missing image


     Every time
   The world breaks you,
 My darling,
   I will be
     Your rock.

 

 

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http://oki-oki.deviantart.com/art/imaginary-friends-84873128

^^ it's a beautiful picture ^^

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  • chilali
    October 16, 2008
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    Awww! Nice take on the very beautiful picture. You have written this very well Kyle!


  • Aussie Gypsy gold member
    October 8, 2008

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    This is so sad and so well written, a lovely interpretation of the prompt, something strong in imagery. best to you in the contest

  • panic-tiger-is-here
    October 5, 2008
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    Sgort and sweet


  • kel dog
    October 3, 2008

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    as i said.
    so little words.
    but with a pic, it means alot.
    your great with not many words. another great write. love it.


  • Symphony
    October 1, 2008

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    i would have sworn i replied to this... weird!!

    Anyway; amazing - you came up with such a bright idea [i think most people would take this on the 'sad' side] ... well done you!


    • KyleBerg gold member
      October 1, 2008
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      Haha, i kind of thought you had too how bizarre
      Anyways, thanks for the comment.. it isn't normal for me to write anything uplifting but there you go
      thank you


  • LadyJane13
    September 29, 2008

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    13 words which make me stop and want to believe...so very beautiful


  • Hannie
    September 29, 2008
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    u wrote a poem that suits that picture so cute!!


  • luna-midnight gold member
    September 28, 2008

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    awwww...thats such a beautiful take for the prompt, so sweet. lovely write and good luck
    Stephanie ♥

    • KyleBerg gold member
      September 29, 2008
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      Thanks for the wonderful comment, glad you liked it


  • PrabhuDayal Khattar silver member
    September 28, 2008

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    A great strength ..and a great impact of this small piece but very impressive one in terms of its impact...well done..

    • KyleBerg gold member
      September 28, 2008
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      Thanks for the comment, glad you could feel the impact


  • November-Dani
    September 28, 2008

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    What a wonderful poem for the picture. It is a beautiful picture and I love how you complement it with your philosophical words.
    Well done!
    Dani.

    • KyleBerg gold member
      September 28, 2008
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      Philosophical words?...
      LOL if you say so
      Thanks for the lovely comment


  • Manda Kathryn Greeters member
    September 28, 2008

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    All I could see in this picture was sadness but you saw the beauty and brought it out in your words

    Lovely!
    Best of luck


    • KyleBerg gold member
      September 28, 2008
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      Thanks for the comment Best of luck to you too, i noticed that you were quite inspired by the picture (how lovely is it!!)

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