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Precious touch.



Time passed and patience
faltered from desires
to hold this cherished creation.

knowledge arrives,
prayers have been answered
and
precious touch is mine to receive.

Life held within loving hands
as joy spills from
a contented heart.

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  • Entwining Beauty
    November 15, 2008
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    Oh my gosh! this is such a moving poem, beautiful!


  • maralisa silver member
    October 6, 2008
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    aw wow a very beautiful poem good luck in the contest


  • Riamh
    October 4, 2008
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    What a loving poem. Simply beautiful. Best of luck in the contest.
    Be well
    Slayer


    • MaMa-2-be-Cindy
      October 4, 2008

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      Thank you, pure thoughts from my heart as I am four months pregnant, and can't wait for the rest to come



      • Riamh
        October 4, 2008

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        oh I wish you and baby all the best in the world. What wonderful news! Congratulations!
        Be well

        Slayer


  • Sweet Impatience gold member
    October 4, 2008

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    you've done an absolutely wonderful job with this prompt. this is a fav pic of mine. babies are beautiful and such a wonderful gift. you've captured the essence of this beautiful prompt wonderfully. this brought a smile to me and sent shivers down my spine.

    good luck in the contest

    kat


    • MaMa-2-be-Cindy
      October 4, 2008
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      Thank you so much for your sweet words, it was a heartfelt experiencing writing it


  • kiwigirljacks gold member
    September 29, 2008

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    Just beautiful sis!!! Aww.. tears me up!!



  • fortyninereasons gold member
    September 29, 2008

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    Your muse may be taking a vacation but you sure do write with feeling hun.
    This is simply beautiful
    Much love to you
    Juls

    • MaMa-2-be-Cindy
      September 29, 2008
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      he yep she shone for like a little while and i got this out. then shut down on the next one i tried lol

      but i love this and matt did too

      hehe as im typing this im feeling the baby, little tiny funny feeling in there , love it


  • lowercase prelude gold member
    September 29, 2008
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    this was lovely
    such a joyous time indeed

    wonderful Cin

  • Sweet Impatience gold member
    September 28, 2008
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  • Sweet Impatience gold member
    September 28, 2008
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    yes you are. of course.. nature for you 1st time around..

    http://i290.photobucket.com/albums/ll272/Temptress41/Nature/L-21-2110-waterfall-Z00DE859.jpg

    here is the link for your prompt. let me know if it works for you or not. please

    kat

    • MaMa-2-be-Cindy
      September 28, 2008
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      hmmm im not sure darl nothing seems to be coming...can you give me a dark option as well...and which ever i write for i will use etc


    • MaMa-2-be-Cindy
      September 28, 2008
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      okies will check it out and hopefully it works hehehe

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