They follow us wheree'r we go...
They are mirrrors of life.
They are like strings
Which are attached...
and
Like the marionette
They dance, cry and laugh
When we tell them to.
for
We are the creators of what they do
so
What shadows are following you?
Are they big or small?
Full of light
or
Dark and evil?
Only you know what it can be...
therefore,
Make your shadow reflect your dreams
And it will never die.
dragonheart1
A contest entry
- Shadows by Danna Hobart.
390 points, ended October 12, 2008, 28 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
What is your shadow telling you?
Comments
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Thank you for entering.
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A very good take on the prompt, shadows. Very nice use of simile. Good imagery, flow and tone. Lovely depth of feeling. Vivid descriptives. I think you have a typo in the next to the last line of your poem (you should be your). Other than that this is a fine write. Best wishes in the contest.
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a wonderful take on the promt shadows come in many forms within life and we should choose which shadows we want to follow good luck in the contest
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