Who put that bottle-top on my chest?
I don't know what to do for the best.
Shall I twist it round and get lemonade
Or pull clothes together like an old maid?
Author notes
Picture #5 Her Time
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Comments
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Very originally crafted & interesting write.
Good visuals and descriptions.
Thanks for sharing & best of luck
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Great work! I loved this.
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I had to "bust" out laughing at this one. It allways got to me his watercolors so lovely until you suspect the adult nudes too are of his daughters. That on some level bothers me.
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Thanks for busting a gut at this piece of nonsense. I too am bothered iff the artist were using his daughters as nude models.....rather gothic and creepy. Thanks for the info.
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