Ditch the ads, upload images and much more - upgrade today from 5.95/month!
Read • Contests • Groups • Learn • Forums • Store • Help
 

Cracked and Fallen

Missing image




Shattered the mirror
now I sit
and watch the sunset
fading
beyond horizon.






Author notes


Artist Credit
http://oki-oki.deviantart.com/art/imaginary-friends-84873128

A contest entry

Honest Critique - How Do You Like My Soul?

    : , Your review:

    Comment Suggestion: What is your your first impression?
    • Line numbers  • Invite them to read
    : no Cost: 0 free left 0 points, You have (?)

Comments


  • Aussie Gypsy gold member
    October 8, 2008

    Edit | Reply
    It is interesting how you got this from the prompt, nice interpretation though. Best to you in the contest