Family lost
long ago...
I build stone trail
so they can find me.
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A contest entry
- 13 words by AutumnGypsy.
450 points, ended October 8, 2008, 41 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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This is so poignant, how in 13 words you can get to me like you have is beyond me. Best to you in the contest
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how succintly poignant
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Aw, this is heartbreaking
so touching
ty
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Oh gosh.. that's sad and touching!!
Amazing 13 words!
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Very sad, it's true.
Best of Luck
Love
Don
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Very deep and sad!
What a terrible feeling for someone
so young and innocent to have. Such
a sad reality that we have children
going through this everyday in the
world. Wonderful thought for this
prompt my friend and good luck!
Jeremy0826
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I like alot!
Nothing would come to mind for me
good luck in the contest
Juls
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This one really tugged at my heart strings. I just want to hug the poor thing!! Good luck in the contest.
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aw sis this a brilliant take on the image very deep and emotionaly sad good luck in the contest
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