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earthshattering

the child’s pebbles tremble
as the soldiers’ boots
on the hillside
grow closer

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http://oki-oki.deviantart.com/art/imaginary-friends-84873128

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  • Aussie Gypsy gold member
    October 8, 2008

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    This is amazing, I had never thought someone might interpret this in this way, I am blown away, best to you in the contest


  • Bean Sidhe silver member
    September 28, 2008

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    Wow. I find that I am usually incapable of getting my thoughts across when limited by words or lines. You did a fantastic job where I fail consistently. Excellent.