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24 Weeks

An event unexpected,
a conception unplanned.
A future difficult to hold close
until the ultrasound shows labia ...
the wonder of your daughter
yet to come.

Then on a Sunday
when life seems sweet,
a trip to the hospital.
You reborn into a world of loss,
and hurt,
and longing.

We struggle  to express our sympathy
with words
a dozen cliches long
for a life no longer viable ...
stillborn
a little past half way to birth.

And I don't even know
if she's named.

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  • Shannon62875
    October 8, 2008

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    aww

    This is a great write.. Im really sorry if this has happened to you.. Keep up the great work and good luck in my contest!!!

    Shannon*LEAh


    • k2hsharpe
      October 8, 2008
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      thank you for comment Shannon*LEAH
      Not to me personally though,
      it happened to a young woman I know ,
      little I said that didn't sound trite even to me

      Kevin