take the homespun dreary sound of light
and turn it into something else, quite new
and lift the hot white fission of the sun
circle it, invert it, ring it: we have you.
A contest entry
- creative & raw by Dienush.
1000 points, ended October 4, 2008, 11 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Quite interesting and creative take on the picture prompt. I enjoyed this. Especially the end result of the recipe and "lift the hot white fission of the sun
circle it, invert it, ring it" Thank you for this entry.
~Diana
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