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Look you just don't understand
when I say I love you
I mean it.

I mean honestly
do you think I would
just go around saying that
to all the other fillies
around.

Nope!
It's you who are
the special someone in my life.

It's you
who really rocks my world.

All I have to do
is get you to understand this.


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option #4 explaining how much I love you is like explaining how water tastes, it's impossible.

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  • Heavenly Angel silver member
    September 29, 2008

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    This is sweet and just says it all
    A fine take on the quote
    Thank you for sharing!
    I wish you the best of luck!


  • Jeremy0826 silver member
    September 28, 2008

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    This is beautifully written an so sweet!
    I hope that you do well with this write
    in this contest. Good luck!




    Jeremy0826


  • AliceinPoetryLand gold member
    September 28, 2008
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    Aww this is gorgeous! Great take on the prompt
    All the best in the contest.
    Gaylene