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I watched the Sun shine
I watched the Moon glow
I sat on the shoreline
And watched the waves flow,
Your beauty shines beyond divine
I will never let you go
In my heart you will always be mine
And that's all you need to know

Author notes

i wrote this one morning
and i saw the two birds chirping together so happily (=

it reminded me of someone

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  • sense surreal
    September 29, 2008

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    Welcome to AP

    It's nice that something simple could inspire us to write...Your write gives beautiful emotions deep within...positivity and contentment and especially happiness in enjoying the simple things in life.

    Thank you for sharing this.


  • thesefadingstars.
    September 28, 2008

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    welcome to allpoetry...this is a very good poem. Its short but the rhyming is goodand not forced. Great poem.


  • Manda Kathryn Greeters member
    September 28, 2008

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    Welcome to AllPoetry

    What a beautiful poem to start the day with
    I am pleased you posted this and shared it, the imagery is lovely and well placed within this


    Enjoy AllPoetry
    Stay safe
    ~Manda
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