I can't believe I never noticed before
That your eyes are the same color as the sobbing sky
That they're the most amazing things I've seen,
The sheer beauty of them makes me cry.
Brought down to my knees
I'll tell you I love you til I bleed
Always to be by your side
You're the one I love, the one I need.
A less-than-perfect romance
Of two teenagers who are ahead of their time
All I can do is hold you tightly
And call you forever mine.
Everything will right itself
Because its all so wrong
Soon, I'll be safely in your arms
Trust me, Angel, it won't be long.
I can't write anything beautiful for you
I don't have the talent to move you,
But please understand
That I pour my soul into everything I do.
Author notes
For Natalie. I swear to god, I love her more than I even know myself.
Love me, Fear Me, Do As I Say.... and Comment! :D
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Beautiful!!!
Your words that you just expressed were beautiful so there for you can and did write something beautiful. Keep expressing yourself from your heart and you always will. God Bless, Jo-Ann
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you are in love..and your pen and your emotions are dipped in the river of the love..a beautiful immagery is here..well done...
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This's been the ubteenth time something like this happened with us, but this really did affect me more than can be said.
I'm happy that I broke in front of you.
If I ever do something like this again, smack me, no matter how depressed I say I am. Losing you again would only make it all worse. ♥ Never say that you don't have the talent for something.
I loved the poem. Beautiful, haha, and I liked the simile you used in the first stanza.
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