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Underneath







In the sheltered silence of last year's foliage  
the orange blossom waits

holding her place to the passage of the wind
and the talk of an elderly farmer
wishing his hands were thick enough
to move the grey
and let her through

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Prompt ~ Shadow

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  • Danna Hobart
    October 5, 2008
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    Oh yes! Bravo on this one. An excellent take on the prompt. Thank you for entering.


  • trekkergirl
    September 28, 2008
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    nicely written. Like the idea of a farmer