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Lovey-dovey and sickeningly cute
Still head-over-heels, we should end this dispute

I'll give you a kiss if you trade me a smile
All I want is you to be holding me a while

But I want to start slow- lets hold hands at first
Then we can move on, kissing conversed

I'm getting chills at night if you can't say 'good night'
It gives me empty feelings I just can't fight

It doesn't matter what we do- It's not like we're in love
We just like eachother more than enough to do what's listed above

Author notes

FFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUCK

Man I can't sleep and my throat is killing me. I've been in the mood to write lovey crap lately :c

Sorry if it's not good, i was a little distracted while writing this one

not much to ask, is there?

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  • xxdarkvalentixx
    September 28
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    wow butiful!!!! i can see love in the air....


  • PrabhuDayal Khattar gold member
    September 28

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    yes..I agree with the list and its nature..your love is more than the listed items..one can related with such a wonderful poetry..well done...

  • DarknessOfSanity
    September 28

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    adorable

    i like it. it is good.

    my favorite lines:
    "It doesn't matter what we do- It's not like we're in love
    We just like eachother more than enough to do what's listed above"

    they so classic. and absolutely make the poem. because it starts out all lovey-dovey and then is suddenly all "but i don't reall love you, just like you a lot" and it's like "oh...but awww!" to the reader. it's well-done! keep it up!