I lie alone in the dark,
Awake with the memory of you.
The gifts of your body, shared unforgettably,
The blush of your love still tingles on my skin.
Half sleeps blessing frees my hands to follow a heated path.
But, I am alone.
I yearn to go back to the half sleep,
To loose myself in the scent of your neck,
To move again in a chorus to your needs.
For satisfactions sake, I spend myself.
But, still, I am alone...
Awake with the memory of you.
A contest entry
- this contest is for adults only. by JinSays.
500 points, ended September 29, 2008, 10 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Half sleeps blessing frees my hands to follow a heated path.
But, I am alone.
I yearn to go back to the half sleep,
Sad. Im really glad to see you here though. You had a hell of a time getting in, but you did it. Tha alone is worth a prize. Thank you for trying so diligently, I cant help but feel a little humbled. Wasn't so long ago I was new to all this.
Blessings, and good luck,
jin -
Hello again. It's me, your friendly neighborhood contest hostess. (hi!)..Okay, we seem to be having a problem getting this into the contest. This is what I want you to do.
When you come on in the morning, IM me. I will once again allow that contest to accept prewrites, which is what your poem is considered now. Go to the contest page after you IM me, scroll down, find enter prewrite, click on it; choose this poem under the cascading window, and you'll be in. This will not work until you get ahold of me, and I allow for them to come through.
Okay? I know it's confusing, but dont worry, we all had to start out somewhere.
BTW, your poem is really good.
I will judge it once you enter.
Much love,
jin -
This is a good sensual write that I enjoyed reading! Great job
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