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Faithful

born of light
travel all along journey,
deserted friends beckon,
wealth leave,
we may be stranded
in wild desert,
our shadow keep company,

trees shadow gives shelter
falling against Sun's light
gives shelter to traveller
weary of heat,
without discrimination.

image comes with light
goes with it,
Companion of bright
gives shelter for Sun's heat.

Author notes

Shade is born of light, gives shelter for heat

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  • Danna Hobart
    October 4, 2008
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    Thanks for entering.


  • maralisa silver member
    September 28, 2008

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    a wonderful take on the promt I think your imagery and depth in your poem is very powerful good luck in the contest dad