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A girl I knew

It is early morning
the lights are still low
footsteps are coming
for that little girl, I know.
She is only five years old
and doesn't know wrong from right.
She is sleeping holding teddy tight.
Her father enters her bedroom
quietly as a mouse
pulls down her blankets
pulls up her blouse.
His hand caresses like a lover
he has a sickness a need.
She wakes and he continues
he smiles and says shh.
He pulls down her cotton panties
so smooth to the touch
she makes noises
but doesn't know why
"Should this be happening."
she asks God in the sky.
More footsteps are heard
"Where are you Charles?"
"Oh just tucking in Susie"
That's when she cries
Mother comes running
what is wrong with her babe?
father is already there.
this draws a nerve.
Panties down to her ankles
and screaming now
pointing at father
He runs outside.




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This is a message poem. It is to those abused . DID and to the scum that abuse little children that all should die. This is for my fiancee a victim of incest

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  • November-Dani
    October 12, 2008

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    There are definatly some fucked up people out there. Thank you for your poem-message. It gives a wonderful message.
    Dani.


  • endless-lover silver member
    October 7, 2008

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    this is sad becasue it happends out in this fucked up world as much as i and so many wish it didnt but good work,

    vanna


  • trekkergirl
    September 30, 2008

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    Unfortunately a lot of children suffer from this same kind of abuse. I don't think of this at all as a sickness but a choice. Those same people know what is right and wrong. They just choose to pick on someone who cannot fight back. They are criminals no doubt. They should be jailed. They should be tortured like those innocent that they choose to torture.

    More people should be made aware of the signs and symptoms of the abuse so it can be stopped. And people need to stop protecting the victim. Family protects family. But do they really. No they harm the innocents.

    A lot say... oh that's just so and so... he's a little strange.

    Sorry for your loved ones pain. I understand it completely. But your love and your understanding can help her along the long rode to recovery.


  • guitarchick
    September 29, 2008

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    this was exellent. very deeply sad. i have a beautiful 3 year old daughter and just the thot of some fucken sicko touching her innocent lil body and hurting her like that just makes me want to vommit. you did very good in this. and you are most definatly right, all of the creeps that hurt children in this way shud DIE a horrible death. im in tennessee and not too long ago there was on the news of an underground porno ring, and it was child porn. these men recorded them molesting children. ages 4, 2, and there was an infant. how fucking sick is that?! uh. like i said, i have a 3 yr old. but i also have a 13 month old son. just the thot makes me so sick. good job on your poem. maybe it will open ppls minds a bit more.


  • Jenny84
    September 28, 2008

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    Wow. The sad part is I have a five year old daughter. This shit really happens out there and it sucks. It just makes me want to kill mother fuckers. I'm glad you put the truth out there though. Nice job.


  • City-of-Angels
    September 28, 2008

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    Ugh sick. I agree with you on this one.
    Anyone who would do something like that to a child is just SICK. A child..they don't know the world, they are innocent and so trusting. Anybody that would ruin that..ugh discusting. Thanks for sharing this.

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