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I'd appreciate it (Sonnet)

Seventeen years old, life is so confused,
stability threatened, causes foul rage.
An outlet is needed, put pen to page,
when a face to face talk has been refused.

If your heart lies broken, bleeding it's last,
give a voice to your pain, let it fly free.
Denying oneself is not good you see,
forget yesterday, what's passed is the past.

Beauty of expression is in our soul,
be it rage, love, humor, it's therapy.
Take control, make your own serenity,
letting life run you, will take a great toll.

Besides, I made you that really cool background,
So, I'd appreciate it a lot, if you'd stick around.





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Love you Tory

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  • CookieZeal Greeters member
    October 16, 2008

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    Very pretty, A nice entry and applicable to the criteria. Congrats on the gold!


  • Violinstrings silver member
    October 7, 2008
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    yes

    good rhyming with meaning and good content


  • PassionsPromise gold member
    September 27, 2008
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    Hmmm.

    Okay


    Good luck to you

    Love
    passions


  • Blooming Poet
    September 27, 2008
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    you have a point there. darn you, making me want to stay