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You'll never let me down..

You throw me
to altitudes unknown
to snow-iced
mountain tops of highs

I open my eyes
next to your caresses,
gentle but cold
tastes

You give me
peaks of pleasure
and happiness
of the sunrise




Oh my Starbuck's Mocha Frappuccino
You'll never let me down

Author notes

xD I felt like writing a poem to my beloved. Ah I couldn't live without my caffeine

"You cannot teach a man anything; you can only help him find it within himself"

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  • oceanbluize
    November 4, 2008

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    To express such deep conviction about a beverage...interesting, I should like to know your thoughts on chocolate? A splendid write Angel!


  • sheltered
    November 2, 2008

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    "You give me
    peaks of pleasure
    and happiness
    of the sunrise"

    wow
    that should be cliche
    but you spun it into something
    new and beautiful


  • MD Masroor
    October 19, 2008

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    WOW! I was so thinking that! not! Beautiful.. I feel your love towards coffee. With vivid imagery, and deep words, I felt like I was drinking my Honey Latte again..


    • City-of-Angels
      October 19, 2008
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      Ahh man, Honey Latte? That sounds AMAZING. xD
      Thank you for your comment

      • MD Masroor
        October 19, 2008
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        I'd expect nothing less from Starbucks. Just the best of coffee!


  • heart shaped box
    October 8, 2008
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    This is a clever little twist of a poem.
    nice


  • Curious LiLi
    October 4, 2008

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    AHHHHHHHHHHH!

    Starbuck's Mocha Frappuccino is liquid heaven!!!
    :]]]

    Oh, and it was beautiful!!

    Great. Now I want one!

    • City-of-Angels
      October 4, 2008
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      hell yes! Somebody that agrees with me!! I call it my heaven in a bottle


  • Aesthete
    September 30, 2008

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    hahahahahah o shiiiiiiit. i was expecting, and tolerating (so I thought) some random love poem, but you surprised me! you rule.



    I want more clappies. one hundred of them.


    • City-of-Angels
      October 1, 2008
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      LMAO don't you just love that surprise element
      Yeah probably not one of my deepest pieces haha I just wanted to write something random. xD


  • xeroabyss II
    September 28, 2008

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    Love never has to be confined to the boundries of two people.
    Can just imagine the cuddling going on...until a spill occurs and somebody gets a bit of a burn.

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