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Rise to Fall

I drew my a new personality for me
through the eyes of another trip sparked insomnia
thought I'd been up for (2) six days turned out I
  f
  e
    l
    l
Into it for nine
wish I didn't have to rely on you
believe in you
turn to you
    e up to you
  s
  i
r
I'd give what's broken out of my soul
to trade it for a heart
So I'm not t,ra[p]ped in my mind
watching the broken fan in the corner
swirl it's dead air

Maybe I'm not trapped
Maybe I'm just a gl(itch
]in the (e)asily
        (x)treme
        (t)imes we're in now
A government about to crash as hard as me
and people on more meds than me running (away)
our great (damned) country

So I hit another (t)rip
giggle my way to the p(a)rk
I promise every thing is o(k)
and that everything such a bor(e
                  is so(me)thing wrong?
my head spins it's three sixty arc
and I start where I began....damn

Author notes

Yay!!! finally a DP piece that I actually feel good about. wewy

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  • xxRainbowDawnxx
    December 30, 2008

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    I trusted the wrong person and I will always regret that in a sense, but I learnt valuable lessons from him as well. Don't trust easy and don't always believe what others say about you.


  • SchizoChic
    September 28, 2008
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    Nicely done indeed. Best of luck.