"You just need
to find someone
to tell you you're
beautiful everyday
'til you believe it"
and when you've run
as far away from these
words as you can.
and your shadow is nowhere
to be found.
She'll be waiting for your return
in his arms.
A contest entry
- Shadows by Danna Hobart.
390 points, ended October 12, 2008, 28 entries
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I've never heard a theme anything like this. And I would have to say that I liked it very much.
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Nicely done. Thank you for entering my contest.
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so true
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I really like this one, the ending certainly made me smile. Good luck in the contest. sj
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ahh now I like the twist at the ending. Good job. Hope you find that shadow. Sounds like a good place to look in my opinion.
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