I hate this world
and hate more the words
Never give up
because these three words
can only make you cry
today i've seen one of my friend
the foolish boy fell in love
because he believe in
never give up
then you know what?
what happened to him
he just only got hurt
A contest entry
- Never Give Up (1000 Points) Lots of HMs by sOuL.
750 points, ended December 14, 2008, 43 entries
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Love does hurt when you get refected but it would be worse actually never to open yourself to that. "Tis better to have loved and lost" you know the rest.
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Now that's a very sad and pessimistic write.
Be well,
Slayer -
This is a good write, well written. Very pessimistic though.
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yeah this is a very pessimistic poem and i think i know about whom it has been written
very funny ..a
anyway a good write
seems like someone great has written this great piece -
a very pessimistic poem
and i dont know why you have written he whole thing in this way
may i know your friends story?
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